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Dear Alina,
Thank you for the letter! I hope, you are well! And now Im writing about me and answering your questions.
My favorite hobbies are ice skating and learning Chinese. I wrote about it in the past letter. Also I like making photos. Its very interesting process. I have to find right, new andand beautiful angles and perspectives. By the way, all of my customers like my works. But now Im only a student and Im studing photography the second year.
What about you? Do you have more one hobby? What is it? Do you want to arrange a photosession? Do you want to be a madel in my photoshoot?
Im looking forward to seeing you!
From Ann.

Не past а last
надо писать do you have more than one hobby


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